अयोध्यायां शोकविलापः · Lamentation in Ayodhya after Daśaratha’s death
Setting: Ayodhyā palace (royal bedchamber)Places named: Svarga (as destination), Ayodhyā
तमग्निमिव संशान्तमम्बुहीनमिवार्णवम् ।
हतप्रभमिवाऽऽदित्यं स्वर्गस्थं प्रेक्ष्य पार्थिवम् ॥१॥
कौसल्या बाष्पपूर्णाक्षी विविधां शोककर्शिता ।
उपगृह्य शिरो राज्ञः कैकेयीं प्रत्यभाषत ॥२॥
tam agnim iva saṅśāntam ambuhīnam ivārṇavam |
hataprabham ivādityaṃ svargasthaṃ prekṣya pārthivam ||1||
kausalyā bāṣpapūrṇākṣī vividhāṃ śokakarśitā |
upagṛhya śiro rājñaḥ kaikeyīṃ pratyabhāṣata ||2||
तमग्निमिव संशान्तम् अम्बुहीनमिवार्णवम्। हतप्रभमिवादित्यं स्वर्गस्थं प्रेक्ष्य पार्थिवम्॥ कौसल्या बाष्पपूर्णाक्षी विविधशोककर्शिता। उपगृह्य शिरो राज्ञः कैकेयीं प्रत्यभाषत॥
On seeing the king who ascended the heaven just as a blazing fire suddenly extinguishes, or like the ocean emptied of water or the Sun bereft of splendour Kausalya raised the head of the king on to her lap, her eyes filled with tears and body shrunk in sorrow, looked at Kaikeyi and said:
When vows are granted without discernment, dharma becomes entangled; the collapse of the king is like the collapse of sustaining fires and lights for the household.
Maraṇa-smti and reflection on the fragility of worldly supports; fosters detachment and compassion.
The king likened to cosmic supports (fire/ocean/sun) shows how worldly order is mistaken for permanence; death reveals the substratum beyond names and forms.
Chāndogya/Bhadāraṇyaka imagery of sun and prāṇa as supports; when the support is 'stripped', the seeker confronts the imperishable.
Metaphoric cosmic diminishment: sun without radiance; ocean without water; fire quenched
Vālmīki Rāmāyaṇa 2.66 (Daśaratha's death aftermath); Mahābhārata: similes of cosmic supports failing in lament contexts (thematic)
Vedic cosmological triad: āditya, āpaḥ, agni as sustaining powers
Daśaratha's death scene: 2.64-2.65; Kausalyā's grief earlier in Ayodhyākāṇḍa
Anuṣṭubh (with extended simile-pādas)
Solemn
Gambhīra madhyama-pradhāna, slow with pauses after each simile
The verse uses cosmic similes to show the moral and social vacuum created by the death of a righteous king—suggesting that rājadharma (right kingship) sustains the world’s order, and its collapse is felt like the loss of light and life.
Daśaratha has died. Kausalyā, overcome with grief, holds his head and turns toward Kaikeyī to speak—setting up a direct confrontation in the narrative.
Kausalyā’s frankness and moral clarity in grief: she does not suppress the truth of her suffering and is prepared to speak directly to the perceived cause.
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