Doha 125
त्याग और आज्ञापालन का सोपान: राजधर्म के शिखर से वनगमन का अवरोह, जहाँ ‘लोक-मान्यता’ (जन-प्रेम) और ‘आत्म-निवेदन’ (ईश्वर-इच्छा) एक हो जाते हैं। यह चरण साधक को सिखाता है कि प्रियतम-धर्म (राम) का अनुसरण बाह्य सुख-सुविधा से ऊपर है; करुणा, शील और मर्यादा ही मुक्ति-पथ की पहली वास्तविक सीढ़ी है।
तात बचन पुनि मातु हित भाइ भरत अस राउ।मो कहुँ दरस तुम्हार प्रभु सबु मम पुन्य प्रभाउ।।125।।
tāta bacana puni mātu hita bhāi bharata asa rāu |mo kahũ darasa tumhāra prabhu sabu mama punya prabhāu ||125||
Demi kata-kata ayahku, demi kesejahteraan ibuku, dan demi saudaraku Bharata, wahai Tuhan, penglihatan kepada-Mu adalah segala buah pahala dan kuasa milikku.
Speaker
Rama
Listener
Sage Valmiki
Dasya (humility before a sage), with Shanta and a note of Vinaya
Rama, Sita and Lakshmana have reached Valmiki's ashram and been honoured there. Rama folds his hands, tells the sage the whole story of the exile, and now says that his father's word, his mother's good will, Bharata's kingship and the sage's darshan are all the fruit of his merit.
The verse shows filial obedience, acceptance of the mother's role without blame, and loyalty to a brother who is king. Honouring the sage as a lord shows the ideal of Ramrajya: power bows before wisdom, and a hard situation is read in the light of dharma.
The Absolute appears as a human prince who speaks of his father, mother, brother and merit, and who honours a sage as 'prabhu'. Through this saguna humility the nirguna truth is shown: the one will governs all events, and all of them lead to the lotus feet of saints.
Rama, speaking to Valmiki, goes through the events of his exile one by one: his father's command, his mother's good will, Bharata's kingship. He then adds that now he is blessed with the sage's darshan. Commentators note that the Lord is calling what looks like loss a gain, because every step has led him to a holy seeing. The closing line, 'सबु मम पुन्य प्रभाउ', is Rama's humility: though he is the Lord, he gives the credit to merit and to the sage. The verse prepares the next lines, where Rama asks the sage for a place to live.
Doha (13/11 matra pattern in each line). Line 1: तात बचन पुनि मातु हित (13) + भाइ भरत अस राउ (11). Line 2: मो कहुँ दरस तुम्हार प्रभु (13) + सबु मम पुन्य प्रभाउ (11). The lines rhyme at the end (राउ / प्रभाउ).
Anuprasa (alliteration) in 'पुनि... पुन्य... प्रभु... प्रभाउ' and in 'भाइ भरत'. Gananā/Samuccaya (enumeration) in the list of tat-bachan, matu-hit, Bharat-raj and darshan. Kavyalinga (stated cause) in 'सबु मम पुन्य प्रभाउ', which gives merit as the reason for everything listed. Vyajastuti-like irony, since the exile is spoken of as good fortune.
Rama, the Lord, speaks as a humble devotee of the sage and credits events to his own punya. This fits a Vishishtadvaita reading in which the Lord enters the world of karma and merit while staying its inner ruler. Grief is turned into grace by the way it is seen, not by denying it.
Raga Bhairavi, whose gentle and devotional mood suits Rama's humble gratitude; Raga Pahadi would also fit the forest setting.
तात | बचन | पुनि | मातु | हित | भाइ | भरत | अस | राउ |
मो | कहुँ | दरस | तुम्हार | प्रभु | सबु | मम | पुन्य | प्रभाउ ||
राम पिता के वचन, माता की भलाई और भरत के राजा होने का उल्लेख करते हैं। इसके बाद वे कहते हैं कि अब उन्हें मुनि वाल्मीकि के दर्शन हुए हैं। इन सबको वे अपने पुण्य का प्रभाव बताते हैं।
इस पद में राम की विनम्रता और कृतज्ञता प्रकट होती है। वनवास का दुख भी उन्हें मुनि-दर्शन तक ले आया, इसलिए वे सब कुछ पुण्य का फल मानते हैं। प्रभु होकर भी वे श्रेय स्वयं को न देकर अपने पुण्य और मुनि को देते हैं।
यह दोहा है, जिसकी प्रत्येक पंक्ति में 13 और 11 मात्राओं के दो चरण होते हैं। पहली पंक्ति में 'तात बचन पुनि मातु हित' तेरह और 'भाइ भरत अस राउ' ग्यारह मात्राओं का है। अंत में 'राउ' और 'प्रभाउ' की तुक मिलती है।
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