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Shloka 39

Brahmā’s Discourse to Mohinī

Harivāsara, Desire, and the Satya-Test of Rukmāṅgada

धिक्तस्य मूढमनसः कुकवेः कवित्वं यः स्त्रीमुखं च शशिनं च समीकरोति । भ्रूक्षेपविस्मितकटाक्षनिरीक्षनिरीक्षितानि कोपप्रसादहसितानि कुतः शशांके ॥ ३९ ॥

dhiktasya mūḍhamanasaḥ kukaveḥ kavitvaṃ yaḥ strīmukhaṃ ca śaśinaṃ ca samīkaroti | bhrūkṣepavismitakaṭākṣanirīkṣanirīkṣitāni kopaprasādahasitāni kutaḥ śaśāṃke || 39 ||

น่าละอายต่อ “กวีนิพนธ์” ของกวีเลวผู้ใจทึบ ที่กล้าเทียบใบหน้าสตรีกับจันทร์ โอ้พระจันทร์! ในตัวท่านมีที่ใดเล่าซึ่งท่าทางคิ้ว การเหลือบมองอันพิศวงที่ถูกจ้องซ้ำแล้วซ้ำเล่า และอารมณ์โกรธ เมตตา กับรอยหัวเราะเช่นนั้น?

धिक्shame on!
धिक्:
Bhāva (भाव)
TypeIndeclinable
Rootधिक् (अव्यय)
Formअव्यय, निन्दार्थक-निपात (interjection of censure)
तस्यof him
तस्य:
Sambandha (सम्बन्ध)
TypeNoun
Rootतद् (सर्वनाम-प्रातिपदिक)
Formसर्वनाम, पुंलिङ्ग/नपुंसक, एकवचन, षष्ठी-विभक्ति (Genitive singular)
मूढ-मनसःof the deluded-minded
मूढ-मनसः:
Visheshana (विशेषण)
TypeAdjective
Rootमूढ (√मुह् क्त; कृदन्त-प्रातिपदिक) + मनस् (प्रातिपदिक)
Formकर्मधारय-समास; पुंलिङ्ग, एकवचन, षष्ठी-विभक्ति; ‘of one whose mind is deluded’
कुकवेःof the bad poet
कुकवेः:
Sambandha (सम्बन्ध)
TypeNoun
Rootकुकवि (प्रातिपदिक)
Formपुंलिङ्ग, एकवचन, षष्ठी-विभक्ति (Genitive singular)
कवित्वम्poetic skill/poetry
कवित्वम्:
Karma (कर्म)
TypeNoun
Rootकवित्व (प्रातिपदिक)
Formनपुंसकलिङ्ग, एकवचन, प्रथमा/द्वितीया
यःwho
यः:
Karta (कर्ता)
TypeNoun
Rootयद् (सर्वनाम-प्रातिपदिक)
Formसर्वनाम, पुंलिङ्ग, एकवचन, प्रथमा-विभक्ति (relative pronoun)
स्त्री-मुखम्a woman’s face
स्त्री-मुखम्:
Karma (कर्म)
TypeNoun
Rootस्त्री (प्रातिपदिक) + मुख (प्रातिपदिक)
Formतत्पुरुष-समास, नपुंसकलिङ्ग, एकवचन, द्वितीया-विभक्ति
and
:
Samuccaya (समुच्चय)
TypeIndeclinable
Rootच (अव्यय)
Formअव्यय, समुच्चय
शशिनम्the moon
शशिनम्:
Karma (कर्म)
TypeNoun
Rootशशिन् (प्रातिपदिक)
Formपुंलिङ्ग, एकवचन, द्वितीया-विभक्ति
and
:
Samuccaya (समुच्चय)
TypeIndeclinable
Rootच (अव्यय)
Formअव्यय, समुच्चय
समीकरोतिcompares/makes equal
समीकरोति:
Kriya (क्रिया)
TypeVerb
Rootसम्-ई-√कृ (धातु)
Formलट्-लकार, परस्मैपद, प्रथमपुरुष, एकवचन; ‘makes equal/compares’
भ्रू-क्षेप-विस्मित-कटाक्ष-निरीक्षण-निरीक्षितानिthe observed (gestures): eyebrow-movements, amazed side-glances, looks
भ्रू-क्षेप-विस्मित-कटाक्ष-निरीक्षण-निरीक्षितानि:
Karma (कर्म)
TypeNoun
Rootभ्रू (प्रातिपदिक) + क्षेप (√क्षिप्, घञ्; प्रातिपदिक) + विस्मित (√स्मि/विस्मि, क्त; कृदन्त-प्रातिपदिक) + कटाक्ष (प्रातिपदिक) + निरीक्षण (नि+√ईक्ष्, ल्युट्; प्रातिपदिक) + निरीक्षित (नि+√ईक्ष्, क्त; कृदन्त-प्रातिपदिक)
Formसमाहार-द्वन्द्व/समुच्चयार्थ-समास (list-like compound of gestures); नपुंसकलिङ्ग, बहुवचन, प्रथमा/द्वितीया; ‘(those) observed: eyebrow-throws, amazed side-glances, looks…’
कोप-प्रसाद-हसितानिanger, grace, and smiles
कोप-प्रसाद-हसितानि:
Karma (कर्म)
TypeNoun
Rootकोप (प्रातिपदिक) + प्रसाद (प्रातिपदिक) + हसित (√हस्, क्त; कृदन्त-प्रातिपदिक)
Formसमाहार-द्वन्द्व (anger, favor, smiles); नपुंसकलिङ्ग, बहुवचन, प्रथमा/द्वितीया
कुतःhow/whence
कुतः:
Prashna (प्रश्न)
TypeIndeclinable
Rootकुतः (अव्यय)
Formअव्यय, प्रश्नार्थक (interrogative adverb) ‘whence/how (possible)?’
शशाङ्केO moon
शशाङ्के:
Sambodhana (सम्बोधन)
TypeNoun
Rootशशाङ्क (प्रातिपदिक)
Formपुंलिङ्ग, एकवचन, सम्बोधन-विभक्ति (Vocative singular)

Narada (contextual attribution within Narada Purana dialogue tradition)

Vrata: none

Rasa: {"primary_rasa":"hasya","secondary_rasa":"raudra","emotional_journey":"Begins with scornful condemnation of clichéd poetry, then pivots into witty praise-by-contrast: the Moon lacks the living expressions found in a woman’s face."}

S
Shashanka (Moon)

FAQs

It teaches viveka (discernment) in speech and praise: superficial comparisons are criticized, and one is urged to recognize true qualities rather than repeating conventional flattery.

Indirectly, it refines devotional expression by warning against careless, clichéd praise; bhakti is strengthened when words are truthful, attentive, and aligned with real attributes rather than empty metaphor.

A practical takeaway relates to Vyākaraṇa and Nirukta-informed precision in meaning: the verse models careful semantic discrimination and rhetorical correctness (upamā-doṣa avoidance) in Sanskrit expression.