रावणवधदर्शनम् · Lament of the Rākṣasa Women upon Seeing Rāvaṇa Slain
Addressed to RavanaSetting: Laṅkā
अशृण्वतातुसुहृदांसततंहितवादिनाम् ।
मरणायहृतासीताराक्षसाश्चनिपातिताः ॥१८॥
एतास्सममिदानींतेवयमात्मा च पातितः ।
aśṛṇvatā tu suhṛdāṃ satataṃ hitavādinām |
maraṇāya hṛtā sītā rākṣasāś ca nipātitāḥ ||18||
etāḥ samam idānīṃ te vayam ātmā ca pātitaḥ |
तुमने अपने अच्छे दोस्तों की बात नहीं सुनी। जो तुम्हारे भले की बात करते थे, उनको इग्नोर कर दिया। सीता को उठा लाए, और अब मरने के लिए। तुम्हारे सारे राक्षस भी मर गए। अब तुम भी गिर गए, हम भी गिर गए, सब बर्बाद हो गया।
"You did not listen to the good advice of your dear and good at heart. You brought Sita and destroyed yourself and all of us at a time."
A ruler who rejects beneficial counsel and commits adharma drags both self and dependents into destruction.
Practice of śravaṇa (listening) to satpuruṣa counsel; restraint of desire; reflection on leadership ethics.
When buddhi (discernment) is eclipsed, the will chooses adharma; the resulting saṃskāra-chain drags both self and dependents into suffering.
Kaṭha Upaniṣad chariot allegory: when the intellect fails to rein in the senses, the traveler reaches ruin; here, refusal of 'hitavāda' mirrors loss of śreyas.
Vālmīki Rāmāyaṇa 3.36-3.47 (Sītā-haraṇa as pivotal cause); Vālmīki Rāmāyaṇa 6.8-6.12 (Vibhīṣaṇa’s counsel and its rejection—contextual parallel); Rāmacaritamānasa Laṅkākāṇḍa (Rāvaṇa’s refusal of counsel leading to ruin—parallel theme)
Nīti-śāstra motif: ignoring good counsel destroys king and kingdom (general)
Vālmīki Rāmāyaṇa 6.113.19 (explicit mention of Vibhīṣaṇa’s good counsel)
Anuṣṭup
Solemn
Tīvra (sharper) on accusatory phrases, then heavy cadence
Ignoring truthful, beneficial counsel (hitavacana) and violating another’s marital sanctity leads to collective ruin; adharma in leadership destroys both self and society.
The women explicitly connect Laṅkā’s devastation to Rāvaṇa’s refusal to heed well-wishers and his abduction of Sītā.
The virtue of listening to wise counsel—humility and receptivity to satya (truth)—is emphasized by its absence in Rāvaṇa.
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