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Agni Purana — Sahitya-shastra, Shloka 9

काव्यगुणविवेकः

Examination of the Qualities of Poetry

अनिष्ठुराक्षरप्रायशब्दता सुकुमारता उत्तानपदतौदर्ययुतश्लाघ्यैर् विशेषणैः

aniṣṭhurākṣaraprāyaśabdatā sukumāratā uttānapadataudaryayutaślāghyair viśeṣaṇaiḥ

The excellence of diction consists in the predominance of non-harsh syllables, in tenderness (softness of expression), and in the beauty of clear, straightforward words—adorned with commendable qualifiers (appropriate epithets).

अनिष्ठुर-अक्षर-प्राय-शब्दताspeech mostly with gentle (non-harsh) syllables
अनिष्ठुर-अक्षर-प्राय-शब्दता:
Karta (कर्ता)
TypeNoun
Rootaniṣṭhura (प्रातिपदिक) + akṣara (प्रातिपदिक) + prāya (प्रातिपदिक) + śabdatā (प्रातिपदिक)
FormFeminine (स्त्रीलिङ्ग), Nominative (1st/प्रथमा), Singular (एकवचन); ‘wordhood consisting mostly of non-harsh syllables’
सुकुमारताdelicacy/tenderness
सुकुमारता:
Karta (कर्ता)
TypeNoun
Rootsukumāratā (प्रातिपदिक)
FormFeminine (स्त्रीलिङ्ग), Nominative (1st/प्रथमा), Singular (एकवचन)
उत्तान-पद-तौदर्य-युत-श्लाघ्यैःby praiseworthy (qualities) endowed with plain diction and generosity
उत्तान-पद-तौदर्य-युत-श्लाघ्यैः:
Karaṇa (करण/तृतीया)
TypeAdjective
Rootuttāna (प्रातिपदिक) + pada (प्रातिपदिक) + audarya (प्रातिपदिक) + yuta (कृदन्त, √yuj धातु, क्त) + ślāghya (प्रातिपदिक)
FormMasculine/Neuter (पुं/नपुंसक), Instrumental (3rd/तृतीया), Plural (बहुवचन); qualifies विशेषणैः; meaning ‘with praiseworthy (features) endowed with plain words and generosity’
विशेषणैःby/with qualifiers (epithets)
विशेषणैः:
Karaṇa (करण/तृतीया)
TypeNoun
Rootviśeṣaṇa (प्रातिपदिक)
FormNeuter (नपुंसकलिङ्ग), Instrumental (3rd/तृतीया), Plural (बहुवचन)

Lord Agni (teaching to sage Vasiṣṭha in the Agni Purana’s instructional discourse)

Vidya Category: {"primary_vidya":"Alamkara","secondary_vidya":null,"practical_application":"Refine diction by favoring non-harsh phonemes, cultivating sukumāratā (tenderness), and using clear words enhanced by apt epithets—useful for composing praise, love-poetry, and lucid narrative.","sutra_style":true}

Encyclopedic Reference: {"reference_type":"Description","entry_title":"Sukumāratā and excellence of diction through non-harsh syllables and clear words","lookup_keywords":["sukumāratā","anīṣṭhura-akṣara","uttāna-pada","tāudarya","viśeṣaṇa"],"quick_summary":"Commendable diction is marked by predominance of non-harsh syllables, tenderness of expression, and the beauty of clear words, further adorned by fitting qualifiers. The verse gives practical criteria for polishing poetic language."}

Alamkara Type: Guṇa (śabda-guṇa) orientation rather than a single alaṅkāra

Concept: Beauty in speech is a disciplined craft: phonetic gentleness plus semantic clarity, ornamented by appropriate qualifiers.

Application: During revision, replace harsh clusters, simplify opaque compounds where needed, and add only those epithets that sharpen imagery without clutter.

Khanda Section: Sahitya-shastra (Kavya-śāstra / Poetics and stylistics)

Primary Rasa: Shringara

Secondary Rasa: Shanta

Visual Art Cues: {"scene_description":"A poet edits a verse: harsh consonant clusters are gently erased and replaced with softer syllables; a garland of epithets is added sparingly to a clear line, symbolizing tasteful qualifiers.","kerala_mural_prompt":"Kerala mural, poet with stylus smoothing rough stone-like letters into flowing vine-like syllables, epithets shown as small flower garlands attached to clear words, warm tones, didactic serenity","tanjore_prompt":"Tanjore painting, central manuscript with gold-leaf highlighting ‘soft’ syllables, decorative but restrained epithet-garlands, rich textile backdrop, ornate frame emphasizing refinement","mysore_prompt":"Mysore style, step-by-step revision scene: before/after lines displayed, labels ‘anīṣṭhura’, ‘sukumāra’, ‘uttāna’, ‘viśeṣaṇa’, clean instructional composition","mughal_miniature_prompt":"Mughal miniature, atelier with poet and calligrapher, delicate correction marks on a folio, subtle floral motifs representing epithets, refined palette and intimate scholarly mood"}

Audio Atmosphere: {"recitation_mood":"instructional","suggested_raga":"Mohanam","pace":"medium","voice_tone":"instructional"}

Sandhi Resolution Notes: aniṣṭhura+akṣara+prāya+śabdatā→aniṣṭhurākṣaraprāyaśabdatā; uttāna+pada+audarya+yuta+ślāghyaiḥ→uttānapadataudaryayutaślāghyaiḥ.

Related Themes: Agni Purana Sahitya-shastra on guṇas like mādhurya/prasāda/ojas (near 345.10); Agni Purana discussion of doṣas (harshness, ambiguity) in the same khanda

FAQs

It imparts poetic-technical knowledge (kāvya-vidyā): how to craft elegant diction using gentle phonetics, clear word-choice, and apt epithets—core markers of refined literary style.

Beyond ritual and theology, the Agni Purana also systematizes arts and sciences; here it codifies principles of Sanskrit literary aesthetics (śabda-guṇa), showing its wide, encyclopedic coverage.

Cultivating truthful, gentle, and well-formed speech aligns with dharma; refined and non-harsh expression supports sattvic conduct and reduces harm caused by speech (vāk-doṣa).