Shloka 18
दुःशीलौ व्यसनासक्तौ धर्मकर्माद्यदर्शकौ । न वाक्यं चागतौ मातुर्वृद्धानां वचनं तथा
duḥśīlau vyasanāsaktau dharmakarmādyadarśakau | na vākyaṃ cāgatau māturvṛddhānāṃ vacanaṃ tathā
അവർ ദുഷ്ശീലരും വ്യസനാസക്തരുമായി ധർമ്മവും സദാചാരവും കാണാത്തവരായിരുന്നു. അവർ മാതാവിന്റെ വാക്കും മൂപ്പന്മാരുടെ ഉപദേശവും അനുസരിച്ചില്ല.
Unspecified narrator (context-dependent within Svarga-khaṇḍa Adhyaya 30)
Concept: Addiction and bad conduct dull discernment; rejecting mother and elders severs the living channel of dharma.
Application: Keep ‘protective listening’ vows: daily hear one dharmic teaching, reduce intoxicants/compulsions, and practice respectful speech to parents/elders.
Primary Rasa: karuna
Secondary Rasa: bibhatsa
Visual Art Cues: {"scene_description":"In a lavish chamber, the two youths turn away as their mother speaks with pleading hands, while grey-haired elders stand at the threshold offering counsel. Shadows gather at the edges of the room—wine cups, dice, and indulgent paraphernalia hint at the vices that have captured their minds.","primary_figures":["two wayward sons","mother","elders/counselors"],"setting":"royal inner chamber with curtained doorway, low tables with luxury items, elders at the boundary between public dharma and private indulgence","lighting_mood":"temple lamp-lit","color_palette":["smoky amber","deep maroon","tarnished gold","ash grey","midnight blue"],"tanjore_prompt":"Tanjore painting style: mother seated with compassionate expression, hands in admonition, two princes turned away with proud faces, elders at the doorway, gold leaf highlighting jewelry and lamps, rich maroons and greens, ornate arch framing the moral drama.","pahari_prompt":"Pahari miniature style: intimate interior scene with delicate textiles, mother’s sorrowful face rendered with fine lines, elders in pale shawls, the sons angled away, cool interior palette with a single warm lamp glow, refined emotional storytelling.","kerala_mural_prompt":"Kerala mural style: bold outlines, stylized gestures—mother’s pleading mudra, elders’ instructive stance, sons’ averted faces, patterned wall motifs, warm reds and yellows contrasted with dark blues to show ethical darkness.","pichwai_prompt":"Pichwai cloth painting style: narrative panel framed by floral borders, mother and elders on one side, sons with indulgent objects on the other, lotus motifs subtly fading near the sons to symbolize dharma’s retreat, deep blues and gold detailing."}
Audio Atmosphere: {"recitation_mood":"dramatic","suggested_raga":"Bhairavi","pace":"moderate-narrative","voice_tone":"emotional","sound_elements":["low mridanga pulse","faint lamenting tanpura","distant conch","heavy silence after admonition"]}
Sandhi Resolution Notes: धर्मकर्माद्यदर्शकौ = धर्मकर्मादि + अदर्शकौ; चागतौ = च + आगतौ; मातुर्वृद्धानाम् = मातुः + वृद्धानाम्.
FAQs
It condemns vice-addiction and neglect of dharma, presenting respect for a mother’s guidance and elders’ counsel as marks of right conduct.
Moral decline is shown as bad character (duḥśīla), attachment to destructive habits (vyasana), and blindness to dharma and proper action.
The verse treats both as primary sources of moral instruction—rejecting either indicates a deeper refusal to live by dharma.